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@duskflower https://docs.google.com/document/d/16dw6pdEaoBjGOr63wZAOVpAS3gVHAbaNUAza9PZ520c/edit?usp=sharing

Everything you’ve done so far has been immensely helpful– if you could keep commenting on the pacing and the themes, that would be great.

One specific thing I’d like feedback on is how relatable you think Anya is. As I was looking over my manuscript, I noticed she’s very goal-driven (which is good) but she also doesn’t have much of an emotional reaction to certain events.