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    Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago

    CATHY THAT WAS A BRILLIANT SUMMARY!!

    Oh thank you!! 😂❤️At the end of it I was kinda like “dang all our characters actually did all that here, huh…”

    Y’know, reading that Alessio likes Bren so much, I think I’ll just swap Jericho out with someone else rather than both Bren and Jericho.  And I’ve thought of another option for who to swap in: Jango Bastion, an Eya Greycloak (of the Falmarin tribe) that serves under Bren’s uncle Joffrey.  As one of the Greycloaks he’s an extremely skilled (and powerful) archer, since the main purpose of the Greycloaks is to hunt wyverns.  He’s also a proficient dancer and uses the grace and speed he’s developed from dancing to his advantage in combat.  Also, because he’s of the Falmarin tribe, he has Force-sensory abilities.  @joelle-stone Malvat would be able to read his mind; he’s nowhere near as powerful as Jericho, and he can’t do similar feats of healing or telekinesis.

    Oh that’ll be fun!! (*assuming Alessio ever works up the nerve to actually say more than two words to Bren…*) Bren’s been a really interesting character to read about!!!
    Oooh bring him in!!!!!

    I’m gonna give y’all a short summary of my characters:

    Ahhh see all our characters need counseling lol XDD I can’t wait!!
    OH I FORGET TO DESCRIBE WHAT ALL THE CHARACTERS LOOK LIKE!!!
    Ok, so Malvat is mostly black with ivory nostrils and a kinda evilly elegant dragon-physic and his human form has long black hair and white eyes (I think…@joelle-stone?), Brendin has a kinda rugged appearance and dark hair and brown eyes that turn gold when his power is activated and Jericho dresses kinda like a female Obi-Wan and has brown hair and dark eyes, and Lupa has brown hair and dark eyes and Mayra has flaming red hair that kinda covers half her face and pretty mismatched eyes and scars on of her face and along her shoulder and a curly figure with lean muscles and Alessio has dark curly hair, brown-gold eyes and olive skin with Asian-Latin features and a scar across his forehead to his left brow.

    There was the food, back on the other side of the cages.

    The food was actually a strange conglomeration of people.

    LOL I actually snorted reading that!

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