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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Mar 2023 19:36:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So apparently after at least two years of absence, I&#8217;m still getting emails from this thread.</p>
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				<title>Tal&#039;s profile was updated</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Mar 2023 19:33:48 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Tal changed their profile picture</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Mar 2023 17:10:42 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 11 Jul 2020 02:33:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kimlikesart/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kimlikesart</a></p>
<p>Ah, okay. Cool.</p>
<p>*ahem*</p>
<p>&#8220;I&#8217;m Luke, from Visra.&#8221;</p>
<p>(is that good enough? XD)</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 10 Jul 2020 23:18:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@kimilikesart</p>
<p>I hast been called out of slumber! What dost thou desire of me?</p>
<p>What do you mean? Introduce who? I&#8217;m not really sure what&#8217;s going on here.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic NaNoWriMo??? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 01 Jul 2020 22:34:26 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sure! I&#8217;ll send the request.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic NaNoWriMo??? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 01 Jul 2020 02:54:21 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Kind of? I&#8217;m going to be starting a novel about halfway through the month, but I need to finish brainstorming and outlining.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Jun 2020 19:23:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/beth20/' rel="nofollow ugc">@beth20</a> I&#8217;m Timothy, the only one on the site. Which is good, since I&#8217;m not going to give out my last name here. &#x1f604;</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t read the mirror part, but I think the basic idea. People are going up and seeing their personalities, more or less?</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Jun 2020 03:28:08 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sorry! &#x1f601; I joined YWW last week and that&#8217;s been taking a lot of time, and then once I fell behind I kept putting off catching up on what&#8217;s been going on. Can you give be a quick summary of what&#8217;s been happening?</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Jun 2020 21:38:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I, uh, never thought of it that way, but that might be a cool addition to the species. They just live in certain places around the world and the humans capture and domestication them for military purposes. At least in most cases. Some lucky few have them for personal travel.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a> Thank you!</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Jun 2020 17:14:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sure! I&#8217;ll just paste an excerpt from where one of my characters sees one.</p>
<blockquote><p>The majestic creatures were a grandiose blend of bright green and smoky gray scales. Their bodies were hunched over like a roadrunner. A pointed, hawk-like head turned to gaze at him with dark, beady eyes. To compliment all of this, burnt orange feathers that&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Jun 2020 00:29:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kimlikesart/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kimlikesart</a></p>
<p>I made an inventory of sounds and started making up and combining words. I was trying to follow a guide I found, but it went way over my head so I just have the very basics. If you&#8217;re interested in making one, there&#8217;s a guide <a href="https://rollforfantasy.com/guides/language-creation.php" rel="nofollow ugc">here.</a></p>
<p>You could also just make up some words, give them meanings, and combine them.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2020 20:29:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think stuff like this exists in real life, but they&#8217;re places air flows in a certain direction, like a sea current. They occur high up, so they&#8217;re used in conjunction with skreel to get around very quickly.</p>
<p>As far as other information, here&#8217;s some of the more interesting aspects.</p>
<ul>
<li>The sun rises in the West.</li>
<li>All cardinal directions are&hellip;</li>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2020 19:43:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t yet have a polished map of my world, but I&#8217;ve been working with a rough pencil sketch for the time being.</p>
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<p><em>Note: This map has slightly changed geography from the newest version of the sketch. This is an outdated scan.</em></p>
<p>We (my cousin and I)  managed to put together a good collection of unique (in my opinion, at least) elements for my&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-80217"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80217/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 30 May 2020 21:39:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@beth sorry. XD I&#8217;m just a little intimidated by having to go back and read all these messages that came out of nowhere.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2020 00:44:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I guess I should get around to writing something since this place has gained a lot of activity suddenly. I&#8217;ll try to come up with something by tomorrow.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2020 20:16:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kimlikesart/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kimlikesart</a></p>
<p>It&#8217;s from<em> The Terrestria Chronicles</em>.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2020 16:25:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So I go to sleep and everyone decides to write XD</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2020 00:10:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/christlover/' rel="nofollow ugc">@christlover</a></p>
<p>I&#8217;m sorry, that must be hard.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a></p>
<p>Hah, nice intro. Libby sounds like a very interesting character.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2020 00:48:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@beth Luke doesn&#8217;t know anyone&#8217;s names, but Dharin, Jaylin, and Isaac know Luke&#8217;s name.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2020 21:28:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“There is a library back here. We may find a map of this place,&#8221; replied the man in the back. Luke nodded agreement.</p>
<p><em>We might also be able to find some books about this place.</em></p>
<p>Now excited with the possibility of finding books from and about this strange new land, Luke said, &#8220;Lead the way.&#8221;</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2020 17:42:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/anne_the_noob14/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anne_the_noob14</a> Maybe I should post an announcement before I add another part XD (also, unrelated, Luke refers to himself as a prince in respect to the King (God), but he&#8217;s by right a king. Just clearing that up if it was confusing)</p>
<p>The man stared into the distance, and it seemed to Luke he was talking something over with himself. He nodded&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79611"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79611/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2020 01:48:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“I’m lost. Could you tell me the way out?” said the voice from behind. He was about to answer, but he swiftly realized there were more people behind him. A boy, about his age, was answering who had apparently asked the question. Someone else stood nearby. One wore strange clothing, but the others were covered in more familiar garb.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2020 23:35:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/anne_the_noob14/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anne_the_noob14</a></p>
<p>Yep, Luke is perfect. I&#8217;ll get to work on a reply.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Book in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2020 00:01:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/beth20/' rel="nofollow ugc">@beth20</a></p>
<p>I read them in the recommended reading order, so the next book I read was <em>The Black Star of Kingston.</em></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Book in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 May 2020 23:52:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/beth20/' rel="nofollow ugc">@beth20</a></p>
<p>That would be Helmer. He&#8217;s definitely one of my favorites from the series.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Book in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 May 2020 22:05:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here are my favorites, in no particular order&#8230;</p>
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<li><em>The Green Ember </em>(and all the other books in the universe that go along with the main series)</li>
<li><em>The Door Within </em>(except the fourth book)</li>
<li><em>Wing &amp; Claw</em></li>
<li><em>The Wingfeather Saga</em></li>
<li><em>The Terrestria Chronicles</em></li>
<li>This is more mystery than fantasy, but all of the Theodore Boone books by John G&hellip;</li>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 May 2020 15:01:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/anne_the_noob14/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anne_the_noob14</a></p>
<p>No problem, I forget characters all the time. &#x1f60b;</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2020 22:53:22 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here you are. Sorry it took so long, I&#8217;ve been away from home most of the day.</p>
<p>Luke is 13, has somewhat unruly brown hair, and is a complete introvert. He&#8217;s from my current fantasy/medieval WIP. While he can be courageous at times, he&#8217;s often very hesitant and cautious. As of the end of my book, which is when I&#8217;ll bring&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79520"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79520/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2020 18:59:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know you&#8217;re a writer when you realize how weird it would be if someone walked up and saw your Thesaurus tab: fat synonyms.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2020 03:02:06 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Yes, that helps. I&#8217;ll bring someone in soon.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2020 22:10:18 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Tal&#039;s profile was updated</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79315/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 20 May 2020 03:48:37 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic How strict is a plot structure? in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 20 May 2020 02:15:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/taylorclogston/' rel="nofollow ugc">@taylorclogston</a></p>
<p>Thanks for the advice! While I certainly don&#8217;t have an adoring fan base (I&#8217;m currently working on my first novel), I&#8217;m not planning to do anything more with this than share it with family and friends (and maybe put it out here). I&#8217;ll keep all that in mind.</p>
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				<title>Tal started the topic How strict is a plot structure? in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 19 May 2020 23:31:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m currently plotting a short story in a three act format, but I&#8217;m having some trouble. For the push point, there isn&#8217;t really any event that would work within the context of the story and characters. So, how strict is a plot structure? Would it be a bad thing if I cut some points of the structure out?</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79142/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2020 20:47:30 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I might be sharing some of the early chapters here once they are more ready, so I&#8217;ll tag you if I do.</p>
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				<title>Tal changed their profile picture</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79140/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2020 20:19:28 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79139/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2020 20:18:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/deeprun/' rel="nofollow ugc">@deeprun</a></p>
<p>That&#8217;s great! I think the bird is perfect. I really like this. Thank you for drawing it! One question, it that symbol on his cloak supposed to be the bird? I can&#8217;t quite tell.</p>
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				<title>Tal changed their profile picture</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79137/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2020 19:35:15 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79134/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2020 19:06:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, I wish I was as immersed in my stories as some of you people are. &#x1f606; Anyways, until then, I have a sizable collection of my own interesting experiences.</p>
<p>You know you&#8217;re a writer when:</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Your school project is to write a newspaper article, but you&#8217;ve already been there, done that, and gotten it published.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>This one may be more of an&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79134"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79134/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79096/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2020 21:45:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a></p>
<p>Me: I don&#8217;t really know. Maybe the size of an average living room.</p>
<p>Luke: What about a room the size of my solar in the castle? If someone had a room like that, I don&#8217;t know why they would ever come out. Especially if it has books in it.</p>
<p>Me: I am well aware of your position on that question, Luke.</p>
<p>Luke: *grins* *walks back to his room*</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79093/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2020 21:23:08 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Oh, wow, that&#8217;s amazing. I think the skin tone is fine. There one thing, though it isn&#8217;t a big deal. I&#8217;m very happy with how it is now. I was imagining the bird more like the US seal &#8211; obviously without the flag and not an eagle &#8211; and the weapons being a bit smaller. Though, like I said, if that would be too much work to change, it&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79093"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79093/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79058/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2020 14:34:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, thanks!</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79050/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2020 02:55:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/beth20/' rel="nofollow ugc">@beth20</a></p>
<p>Actually, it&#8217;s still broken. I had to contact the site and register by email.</p>
<p>No, never heard of it. I&#8217;ll check it out.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79029/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 21:54:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a> no, I&#8217;m new. I joined yesterday.</p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78998/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 17:28:07 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>It is? Hey, that&#8217;s pretty cool. Its full origin is a looong story, but here&#8217;s the short version. It came from the name Talupus, which is a combination of the prefix ta- (meaning fire in Matoran, which is from a Lego theme called Bionicle) and lupus, Latin for wolf (again, long story why I chose that). I shortened it to Tal at one&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78998"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78998/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78996/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 17:09:07 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>And in suspense I am. &#x1f604;</p>
<p>Okay, well, here goes. I wrote this maybe&#8230;a year ago. It&#8217;s based off the verse in II Corinthians 24-27. I also wrote a melody for it, though I&#8217;m not really sure how I can communicate that on here&#8230;</p>
<p>Verse 1<br />
<em>In per&#8217;ls of sea,</em>&lt;/p&gt;<br />
<em>In per&#8217;ls of theives,</em></p>
<p><em>In weariness,</em></p>
<p><em>Through much&hellip;</em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78996"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78996/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78992/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 16:45:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Would anyone be willing to draw Tal? (yes, before you ask, he is named after my alias) Here&#8217;s a description of him from my book.</p>
<p>The knight wore a red tunic inscribed with the golden bird from the banner clutching a sword and an axe. He had a sword belt around his waist and on it hung a leather pouch, a knife, and a long sheath. A deep blue cloak&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78992"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78992/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 16:39:00 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Would your character rather, go into the past and meet his/her ancestors or go into the future and meet his/her great-great-grandchildren?</p>
<p></strong>Luke: Hmm&#8230;probably the past. I love history.</p>
<p>Bollick: The past, of course! I would be able to view the exploits of such legends as Kap Tapson III! Maybe I could even learn a thing or two about adventure&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78991"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78991/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Tal replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78987/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2020 16:21:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>No, I just finished <em>Ember Rising. </em>I&#8217;m absolutely loving the series.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m terrible at art, other than cartography, which I&#8217;m decent at. I somewhat enjoy photography, though I don&#8217;t do it much. I&#8217;ve also done some poetry. I might share some of that at some point.</p>
<p>Ah, this is one interesting question. We&#8217;re across the world from each o&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78987"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78987/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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