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Thank you for the advice. The examples were helpful too. I’m getting the idea that it’s great if my sidekick is annoying –what matter is HOW he is annoying.

Here’s the blurb for my story because I’m not good at summarizing it (probably because my plot needs some major work), so here’s the formal thing I’ve worked up:

In the world of Doxiparakwle, where sylphs dance the sunset into existence every night and the Sun Tyger roars during the day, Blaze accidentally kills a young girl. Fifty years ago, after the last murder, the Thunder Keeper destroyed the entire town. With the Blood Moon about to rise, Blaze must find a way to appease the Thunder Keeper’s wrath, protecting his family and the town that now hates him. Meanwhile, the neighboring chief is hiding secrets from the rest of the coalition about the beasts he is luring out of the mountains, his affair, and Blaze’s father’s disappearance.

(I did know my name meant “gazelle”; it’s a footnote in my Bible Acts 9, but it’s fun to know that someone else found it interesting.)