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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic A Flicker in the Dark in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@j-a-penrose Thanks! It definitely is much better with a bit more emotion, and I like the dramatic “and why?” at the end.
@evelyn Great point! I don’t know why I didn’t think of that. Ginger would never admit that he was wrong or that he was miserable. Everything about him and his home is perfect except Paddler. His personality really shows when you meet Paddler because he’s the picture of a perfect dog, although he is pretty messy 😛
Thanks guys!












