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@this-is-not-an-ailien, @devestate-lasting, @brian-stansell, @daeus-lamb, @Gracie-J, @lissie-w, @fitz, @anyone-else.

Hi!

I’ve spoken a little about my current WIP here I think. It’s a short story under 8,000 words. I decided to post it here to see what you all think! if you want to, I’ll post some questions I’d like answered:

1. does this even count as sci-fi and how realistic do i need to be to write a sci-fi?
2. do the characters seem realistic?
3. any favorites?
4. what do you think of Jake, Marian, and Fabian? Who was your favorite?
5. are the themes and message coming out clear?
6. any tips of reducing word count?
7. Is my pacing good?
8. What do you think will happen next?
9. Would you like to know?
10. Are my descriptions coming in clear?
11. is the plot sound?
12. What were your favorite scenes?