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  • Sam M started the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago

    Hey, everybody. So, here’s a poem I wrote. Feel free to offer feedback if you want to. 🙂

     

    I Would Be

    The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.

    Who would I be if nothing stopped me?

    If all my weaknesses, fears,

    All my sins disappeared.

    And I could begin again.

    I would seek mercy and justice.

    And my hypocrisy? I would bust it.

    I would be shield between the hurting and villains.

    And my pride? I would kill it.

    I would be compassionate to victims.

    And my jealousy? It’d be evicted.

    I would submit to humiliation and pain,

    Having my dreams stolen away,

    If it meant saving a stranger’s soul.

    No matter my personal toll.

    I would never be offended on my own behalf,

    But injustice would always make my soul ache.

    I would do everything right on the first draft.

    My history wouldn’t be drenched in mistakes.

    I would forgive in a second,

    My love would be strong and

    I would treat every human as a child of the Lord.

    As for the world? I’d stop wanting more.

    I would give with abandon,

    And my greed would vanish,

    My heart would be focused on those suffering and famished.

    I would look at life with honesty,

    No matter the pain it might cause me.

    I would act on my convictions.

    Never kneel to the enemy’s restrictions.

    I wouldn’t stray,

    I wouldn’t wander,

    I wouldn’t work my own agenda,

    I would pray,

    I would ponder,

    I would seek Your will forever.

    Truth would rule in my mind,

    And hope would shine without ceasing,

    Faith would reign, never decreasing,

    It would be stronger than an avalanche,

    I wouldn’t stop hoping in that second chance.

    I wouldn’t give up on monsters,

    Not even myself.

    I would seek the good of others,

    I wouldn’t seek wealth.

    My love would be blind

    To enemy lines.

    I would endure suffer to save an enemy,

    I would give compassion to those against me.

    I would care more about humanity,

    Than what they thought of me.

    I would keep my eyes on You,

    And find peace.

    That’s what I dream of:

    To be free.

    I’d remember that I’m your artwork, your servant,

    Your child above all else.

    I never would’ve hiked a thousand miles towards hell.

    I would have courage and honor.

    My love would be so much stronger.

    I would consult Wisdom,

    And build with purpose,

    I know I haven’t done everything I should’ve.

    The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.

    But You can transform me.

    My past is a land of human experience,

    My present can be a training ground,

    Where better patterns can be found,

    Where I can build up humility and fearlessness,

    Learn wisdom, love, and perseverance,

    Where I can be honest and remember:

    Your love -relentless and tender,

    Your forgiveness redeeming me,

    Your grace remaking me,

    Your faithfulness never leaving me.

    My hope remains that I can change.

    That this isn’t how I’ll end.

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