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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago

    @mamaauthoress

    is it … bewitched somehow, to clean the air you breathe?”

    Nobody:

    Not a soul:

    Rúan: WITCHCRAFT????

    I love how that was his literal first reaction XD

    Oh my gosh, that’s an amazing idea.   Like, all of a sudden, Rúan has telepathy instead of elemental fire. Amazing.

    Hm … maybe telepathy would work, since he’s not too considerate of others’ feelings, he could peer inside their head to see what’s really going on … maybe he’ll learn something …

    That’s literally the funniest power you could possibly give him XD I’m just imagining what he’ll see/hear and it gets funnier the longer I think about it.

    Aydin is just like internally screaming or making up very poetic sentences to describe trauma and Liorah’s thoughts are like… the Mii theme played on a kazoo. (Look that up if you want a laugh, it sounds indescribably stupid. XD)

    (And I realize I’m making a lot of jokes about Liorah being dumb and I want to clarify, she is very intelligent, she just… doesn’t think. Ever. And I love roasting my characters XD)

    Once she finds out she would absolutely look him dead in the eye and mentally play like two measures of the most annoying tune she can think of until it gets stuck in his head.

    Oh, goodness, I swear I’m taking this seriously, that’s just the first thing I thought of. XD Liorah has that effect on me.

    Also … wow, that drawing of Aydin is spot-on. Great job!! *clap clap*

    I might pull up a drawing of Rúan …

    Thank you so much! 😀 Yesss!! Please do!! I wanna see it!

     

    @denali-christianson

    AAAAHHHH I keep forgetting to mention this but I LOVE ACYN!!!!!!!! It was so fun having him interact with Niarok 1.0… ya know, weirdly withdrawn, slightly rude Niarok? Before he became his own sweet adorable person? XD I love him!!!

    Thank you! Why did I have literally no idea that Acyn had fans?? I thought he was kinda fine, maybe just because he’s often hard for me to write XD

     I have absolutely no clue how I’d get Niarok to actually fight an ally, but um… I’ll work on him. XD

    A while ago we pulled this kinda gladiatorial thing where two of our characters had to fight or the castle would kill both. That worked nicely and we wrote some fun fight scenes that way!

    Why, why, why, why can I relate to this so much???? Lol that may or may not be my protective system… Although mine is a bit more like put up an angry, icy wall that people can’t get through… lo

    Oh, mood. Totally same XD Why do you think I was writing it??

    OOOOHHHH but see, my friend, it’s going to be soooo fun having Niarok see right through the facade and then trying to figure out how to help gaahhhh he’s back to full-on dad status.

    That’s going to be the best and Liorah will just be like “Me, insecure??? HahAHaha, NeVeR!!” XD

    AAAAHHHH this will be sooooooo weird… Niarok’s ability is literally discernment. Yila’s is super strength and sharp hearing. Ummmmm

    Okayyyyy

    This is an amazing idea but like…

    uuuuhhhhhh…

    Okay, they wouldn’t be themselves without that, so if you want you can let them keep it and just add a random one for funsies XD Or if you have another idea to make it work I’d love to hear it!

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I loved listening to the rant lollll we should totally do this in a bit after we’ve had some time to assimilate master Khalon further into our cult I MEAN FRIENDLY WRITING GROUP

    Oh, no, we are abSOLutEly not a cult. NoOpe.

    Oh goodness. *facepalms* I see utter chaos in our future. As in… Liorah tries to be Liorah around Yila and Yila just kinda… casually strangles her before she realizes what’s happening.

    uuugghhhhhhhh

    Although this could also be really cool.

    We should probably try to make Yila and Liorah friends just as quickly as humanly possible to keep the blood to a minimum. XD

    I knowwww… Ugh, Liorah grabbed the outline and ran with it XD That wasn’t the plan XD

    It would be funny though, but you can also just have Yila dislike her if that’s in character! There only needs to be one insult and Liorah will loathe her so that’s not a problem XD

    I LOVE ITTTTT!!!!!!! It’s not quite how I pictured him, but goodness, I love it!!!! XD

    Thank you so much! 😀 How did you picture him differently? (My mom said the exact same thing XD)

    @emily-waldorf

    Yup, you got it! Put me on the list. <3

    Absolutely! *Happy dance*

    Ahh, you’re a wonderful artist! He looks good and (this is gonna sound weird) actually plausible. What I mean is you must have a good mind-to-hand-to-another’s-mind communication, because his looks didn’t shock me. So you must have not only drawn him well, you must have described him well.

    Thank you so much!! That’s something I sometimes struggle with and it makes me so happy when people go like “Oh, that totally could be him”! It’s something really hard because it’s kind of vague, I could describe him in extreme detail but that wouldn’t really get a picture across, so I have to use a limited description and rely on personality for the rest.

    And getting personality across in a painting is hard. 

    Hope that was a compliment and not an insult; I’m discovering a new ability of mine: grossly insulting people on accident. XD

    LOL, mood XD That was absolutely a great compliment though! I really appreciate it!

    Quin’s eyes flickered toward the princess, and he resisted the urge to flatten himself on the stone floor. If she’s this flustered because I used her title, obeisance would be a bad idea…

    Liorah would have just instantly died XD

    [she has dark eyes?]

    Not really! Really light brown, kinda warm amber/gold!

    Also, this happened before the newcomers and Niarok, so also feel free to read, enjoy, and disregard it.   I have the feeling that Quin and Liorah are going to get along great and like Neasa said, an unlikely three-some.

    It was really fun to read! I think Liorah really likes Quin, she may be in the process of adopting him XD

     

     

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