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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago

    @wingiby-iggiby

    Btw, I LOVE how you show Aydin’s inner turmoil!!! Your prose is so good! One of the things I struggle with is showing a character’s inner monologue, and I think you aced it!

    Aww, thank you SO much, that really means a lot!! He has a lot of inner turmoil, I enjoy writing it XD

    He’s one of those characters who has rather a tendency to have very raw, quotable lines. (Fun fact, his ex-girlfriend has that same tendency, though more abstract. She practically speaks in metaphors only.)

    I really love characters who develop those fun quirks 🙂 Liorah has sass, Faye has really flowy, descriptive, beautiful prose, and Aydin has quotable lines, apparently XD It makes them more fun to write!

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