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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago

    @emily-waldorf

    I’m interested in Sahar’s introduction as “a literal ray of sunshine.” that sounds like a cool character, right there!

    Oohh, she is!!! She’s my sweetest baby and I love her so much! She’s a side character and she needs some more depth, but I love her personality concept! (Basically glitter and knives XD)

    But I actually designed her character as part of a duo and the other part is Acyn. *looks around as I’ve definitely lost Acyn. I think he’s reading somewhere until he gets sassy lines.* Yeah, he’s cool too, he’s basically Sahar’s exact opposite XD

    Ohh, I keep forgetting to mention! If anyone was curious, Acyn’s name is pronounced Aysin. (I pronounce his name differently every time I talk about him but that’s the correct way XD)

    His name is Quin Miller, and at this point in the story he’s very sensitive about his missing leg and the fact that he can’t do anything anymore (this is mid 1800s era, in a fantasy world, so, not much in the way of doctors for poor Quin). He feels really guilty about the carriage accident that caused him to loose a leg (it also killed his mother), because he feels he should have been able to steady the horses, but a moment’s pause (from fear) cost everything. His major fault right now is cowardice annnnddd…that’s all for now b/c I’ve written a lot and am getting lazy.

    Ooohhh!!!! That’s so cool! He sounds so incredibly interesting, I love him already! And I love the era! I’m planning a fantasy novel in the 1900s!! (My current setting is Medieval North Africa, which is where all my current characters are from 🙂 )

    what do the characters do in this here castle? is it like a gigantic role play, or…?

    Yep, it’s a role play! To catch you up on what just happened, there was a big drama with horse-sized wolves with green blood and explosive, carnivorous black slime. (Don’t even ask. XD) Anyway, that’s over, there were several explosions and toppled buildings but the worst thing that happened was that Liorah and Ferran got trapped in a tight space and they were both blushing a lot XD No other disasters XD

    Otherwise… everyone loves Misu, Lorcan and Liorah are nemeses, (he’s somewhat arrogant and Liorah is somewhat allergic to arrogance. It’s a bad mix, but it’s hysterical to write XD) Sahar and Acyn just literally dropped from the sky and unintentionally insulted Lorcan terribly, and now there’s just some general chatter back and forth.

    Rosy and Ehud are having a lovely, surrealistic adventure somewhere else XD The other characters don’t interact with them, so we just get to enjoy the weird adventure and ship them way too much XD (At least, if you’re me, which you’re not, so this remark doesn’t make sense. Pretend I didn’t say anything XD)

    Descriptions:

    Klein is dressed in full sci-fi armor that hides him completely and makes him seem much bigger.

    Lorcan has dark hair and is wearing a steampunk coat and a face mask that covers the lower part of his face. (Which is what Acyn accidentally grossly insulted him about, but long story XD) Also, I just found out he has a Donegal Irish accent and now I can’t unhear it XD (He’s from a fantasy setting, btw)

    Hugon is from Medieval France, he’s blond and a thief and that’s all I know about him XD (And he squabbled with Liorah but everyone else did too so at this point, what’s new? Just assume that unless I mention the opposite, the characters have argued with Liorah. Probably multiple times.)

    Misu is the one person who has not argued with Liorah because he’s a literal, biblical angel and she’s low-key terrified of him XD He has long, dark hair and looks Asian unless he drops his human disguise and does the “flaming wheels” thingy. He’s a sweetheart, he really is. He’s the one character I would love to hug XD

    I’m going to skip Liorah and Ferran because I’m going to take them out now, but Liorah is my MC. (As you can tell from all my descriptions centering around her XD)

    Sahar has dark skin, dark, curly hair, and she’s wearing really bright, colorful, flowy clothes and lots of gold jewelry. She’s average height and curvy/chubby. She’s eighteen and Acyn is seventeen.

    Acyn is lanky, below average height, with light brown hair, skin, and eyes. Kinda a nondescript person, and he’s wearing plain, rather boring clothes. The only exceptional thing is that he’s a scribe and so his hands are currently stained with ink.

    Oh, just saw your post about the names XD Yep, kinda a mess but I still see what you mean 🙂

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