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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
*Stifled sobbing* Oh. My. Goodness, that was so amazing! It felt so real I was genuinely scared for her. Her thoughts felt so real and genuine, it was magnificent! You’re so amazing at emotional scenes, I just get dragged along by Riure’s narration, and her thoughts feel so real and make me love her even more. I was smiling so much when Sadiq was the first to greet her and she was laughing! That was so adorable!
BTW, that post was amazing, especially this part: “I’d never thought about my last words to my sister, honestly, what sane person did? But I hadn’t expected them to be about boots, of all things. It was rather a letdown, but I could live with it. Or die with it, rather.”
As an over-enthusiastic boot-adorer, that was AWESOME. A touch of humor in just the right spot.
Thank you so much! I adore boots too XD And that was kind of Gavril’s sense of humor. I never notice his sense of humor before, but it’s kind of fun! He’s not as snarky as Liorah. (nobody is, she’s the queen of sass XD)
Those where so good! They had my totally engrossed and…*takes a giant ball of tissues from the quickly emptying box*. I almost felt as if we where about to kill of a bunch of characters even though I knew we wouldn’t.
Thank you so much, Jasmine! Your post was awesome, I loved how Gwen was trying to stop the wall.
@everyone
So, who’s taking the next trap? Does anyone have any ideas? Can’t wait to see what y’all come up with!












