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Okey dokey, I had a couple thoughts, one here, one on my next post.

First, the fishbowl idea was truly a stroke of brilliance, @noahlitle 🙂

Thoughts on Fish: Child. I liked the voice, sounds like a goldfish to me. Funloving, wanting to be involved, etc. I love the line: “If fondant could make noise, it would sound like that.” And his memory lapses are great. “Well, what do you know?” Poor guy. He’s so ignorantly confused. Good job, Noah!

A few suggestions. I hate to mention this at all, but can a fish smell aromas in the air? I would’ve thought that impossible. He is a wannabe cook, so that would take away a lot, I’m just not sure if it’s accurate. 🙁 Anybody else have thoughts?
I also put a few comments in the document itself.