@olivia

@purpleturtle

Here is the next installment of the Renner story!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uArbUlh8KwtSLKPpYL6Ja6FuzUZMKrYG1LKAowRh7I0/edit

How are ya doing?

@purpleturtle

@claire-h

Chapter Five: Surprises

Tim had made it safely onto a piece of the floor, and now they were both jumping towards the rows of scrolls. Each row was marked by a symbol that he didn’t…[Read more]

Thanks! Will post the forth one maybe later today!

Siblings:
@kimlikesart My writing sister!
@thedarkninja03 My writing brother!
@purpleturtle My long lost brother!
@claire-h My long lost sister!

Parents:
@eitan My writing father who always has awesome critique!
Mother:

Aunts:
@katja-r My awesome aunt!
@arindown My awesome artist aunt!
@melodyjoy My aunt who loves animals

Haha I hear ya! Okay, fun!! I don’t personally know anyone on here but, I knew Vaughn (aka @purpleturtle) from a different site, and he actually recommended SE to me! And I just “met” Gracie (aka @kimlikesart)! So yeah, there’s a bit of random info that you don’t care about XD!

@purpleturtle Thanks! That is a heck of a plot you’ve got there – I think I have some ideas for Cyril’s appearance and props. He sounds like a man of adventure, like Alan Turner from the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen (except…[Read more]

Also, @purpleturtle, I’ll take Cyril Drake! I’ve not had the best luck with drawing young men lately, but I seem to be a dab hand at old ones. Do you have a full description for him? What’s his role in the story?

Oh my gosh, I have a character named Theodore, and his best friend’s name is Scott! Crazyyy!

Thank you! 🙂 I will!

Thanks!

Yes, loving this site!

Thank you! Yeah well, the man in the police car wasn’t really important lol. I had originally planned on him being more but….. you know, how stories change! haha

Okay yeah, the POV thing makes sense! Though I change from character to character in my later chapters bc there are more characters lol! I think a normal chapter changes POV 4…[Read more]

Just then, his 11-year-old brother, Tim, came crashing out of the house.
“That sister of ours sure is something!” he said, slamming the door.

Just then, his 11-year-old brother, Tim, came crashing out of the house, slamming the door as he went.
“That sister of ours sure is something!”

Which…[Read more]

@Olivia
@PurpleTurtle
@claire-h
@Eitan

Ohh yeah I played that one! It was pretty fun!

Okay, cool. I’ll check it out sometime. So how did you and @claire-h both get into writing? That’s cool that you’re siblings, though. 🙂 None of my siblings really like to write, but I suppose I’m not super into it myself. Just something I do a bit, and want to get into the habit of doing more.

So what are his books about, and what genre does he write in?

Okay! Well after you’ve played one watch the everything wrong part. Which one is that? The Salem one?

That’s really cool! I didn’t realize he wrote books as well as music, so I wasn’t sure if it was the same guy. I really like his one Christmas album. The one called Behold The Lamb Of God. We listened to it over Easter, and it’s a great Easter album as well as a good Christmas one.

So the author you like, Andrew Peterson, is that the same guy who writes songs? I like the music of a guy named Andrew Peterson, but I’m not sure if it’s the same guy. I didn’t realize he wrote books.

Um it’s an xbox 360 game only I think.

From wikipedia: Portal is a series of first-person puzzle-platform video games developed by Valve. Set in the Half-Life universe, the two main games in the series, Portal (2007) and Portal 2 (2011), center on a woman, Chell, forced to undergo a series of tests within the Aperture Science Enr…[Read more]

Yeah Minecraft and Portal are pretty much the only video games I play, I’m not a big gamer lol!

And yeah my mom subscribed! It’s supposed to come out in May I think!

Thanks!

True! Though I was mostly just writing that for fun, and just to write lol! It was a writing prompt from a site called The Write Practise, that I did in 15 min. So there really wasn’t supposed to be any character development.  Unless there’s a way to have character development in such a short story (not being snarky I mean this…[Read more]

Yes you should!

Oh no!!!! That would be soooo sad 😞 I hope he does!

Its a pretty good book written by Christopher Paolini (I think that how you write his last name lol) about a boy who finds a dragon egg and goes off on an adventure with her, an old man named Brom and later meets a boy named     Murtagh! You can defiantly tell the author read LOTR haha!

Oh okay cool! Um yeah I started to but I never finished it, I should prob finish it sometime lol. I usually don’t to that when I read books haha! Have you read Eragon?

You’d be like, “Mighty, time for supper!”

Lol, we don’t think about it so much – our mind just.. separates the name from the word. And Mighty isn’t that strange. I know someone named ”wild goat”…

Isn’t it ironic that their descendants were bitter enemies as well? I just thought that was kind of interesting!

Oh yeah, I know th…[Read more]

I say mine ”Eitan” or ”Eytan”. You can stress either the last syllable (which’s considered correct) or the first (that’s how I pronounce my name).

My name means in Hebrew ”stable” or ”steady” (most Hebrew names are also regular words, even in the bible – Saul is ”the borrowed one”, Isaac is ”he will lough”, Isaiah is…[Read more]

Fellow Wingfeather fan!! Yay! 😀