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  • Throne Warden of Emberia replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago

    @andrew @kari-karast
    Sorry I was gone so long. Busy over Christmas holidays.
    Anyways, Aleck ran off as soon as he heard about magic rubies, and that is where I will be now.

     

     

    Aleck grinned with excitement. If he could only get those rubies, all his troubles with Malcom Ace would be over.

    There it was, two great iron doors, with guards crowded around it.

    Aleck jumped out of the shadows and spun his sword around, subtracting two from the host. He knocked three more down, but the enemy had just cubed itself with all the crowds of soldiers running in.

    “No one steals the lords jewels,’ said a thick one, just before Aleck punched him.

    Too many men were coming.

    Aleck thought quickly. He couldn’t, or rather wouldn’t, call for Malcom Ace, or any his men. Who were those two who had been introducing themselves to each other right in front of him earlier? They had seemed nice.

    “Karim! Delton! Help!” Aleck called.

    And then all went black.

     

    I know, I hate it when chapters end that way, but right now I’m not really caring if it isn’t quality writing.(Which is probably bad…)

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