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Exactly. I have… three chapters total, I think. For one, Liorah is absent but there’s important information, for the other she’s there but I needed it told through another character’s perspective.

I like it. (for a minute there I was worried, thinking you had split your book into third and first person or something xD)

Don’t you just love those little reminders that one is in fact not handling life nearly as well as one thought?

Oh, they’re just glorious.

That’s what makes it challenging to write.

I get what you’re saying, I’ll try to think of some way to make it darker/more conflicting.

Speaking from past experience, it helps a lot to organize your notes and essentially make a revision outline, with exactly what you want to change about each chapter and how you want to change it, otherwise you might either get overwhelmed or risk only adressing the smallest issues instead of the overarching ones.

So you actually know exactly what you want to change about every individual chapter before you start revision? I was just going to go through and add and change things as I go, as well as pick a few specific chapters or scenes to fix or help present character’s better.

And the only thing harder than finding out what weapons they used was how they used them XD I’m winging it, I’ll probably have to fix/change it later.

Don’t worry about it. As long as your swords aren’t blocking arrow shots (I recently read a fantasy book that did that), use em’ how you want to. xD

*Deep sigh* I knew that was going to happen. I give up

😄 Tristan forgives you.