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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Too many villains? in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@warrioroftherealm I mean, I don’t think it’s a big problem. I actually did the exact same thing in mine. 😛 I have one villain you see at first, but after he’s out of the way, two others show up–a “small” villain and an overarching one. So as long as the plot itself is not disjointed, I think it’s perfectly fine and probably all the more interesting for it.
(However, this is just pulling from my experience with my story. I’m not a blank-slate reader of my story, so I can’t pull a non-biased view, but my critique friends have not pointed out a problem with that. So I’m guessing it didn’t cause any issues for them.)












