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Hi everyone 🙂
So I’m looking for a bit of help with my first chapter in my second story. It’s a steampunk mystery short story, and the first person that reviewed it told me it wasn’t steampunk enough, so I’ve been working on that. But what I want to know, (aside from if you find any overlooked spelling errors, or any other embarrassing mistakes which I would like to be told right away) is does it pull people in, will it make readers want to read more? And please tell me if it’s too confusing about what’s going on, or if it’s simply unclear. 🙂 I welcome all the help and any comments I can get! Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y1cgJ05zcty-cS-bnN2EVW9PLaM9l6LTjJO4DHDI7oA/edit?usp=sharing

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