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Fantastic topic thread! Thanks for starting it, @backwardslivewriter !

I’ll critique a couple concepts then drop mine in…

Regarding yours, I love the idea of separated twin sisters starting a war between their adoptive families. It seems like there would be a ton of strong conflict in there! It did strike me as a little odd that both books 1&2 would feature twins, but if that’s part of the theme you’re going for, I think it works. Otherwise, I’m intrigued by these ideas! I guess if I knew a little more about the worldbuilding, I could give some critique on that as well 🙂