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@lonathecat

That was awesome!! And don’t worry; to me, it wasn’t too long.  Once I posted something about maybe twice as long as your entire post on another website that shut down.. *glances apologetically at Wingiby Iggiby and Joelle Stone*

But anyway, yeah, I thought it was really good.  One thing I did notice was this:

I’m pretty sure that the punctuation would be:

” ‘Oh, good morning, Hayen,” she said, looking towards the door.’ ”

So just a comma instead of a period, then the S in she lowercase. 🙂 At least, I’m pretty sure that’s the rule… It’s what it says in my grammar book in school, and on the internet, so I think it should be right. 😀

But that was a delight to read, and I would like to see more!  Fantastic job!