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@toklaham-veruzia Hello I noticed you also beta read for people (which I need) I belive I already taged you on  Jenna Terese beta reader post. Could you please beta read my book for me? It will take you less than 30 or 15 minutes to finish it.

It’s a full length chapter book for kids in 3rd and 4th grade. It is 5 chapters and 6k words and I would LOVE some feedback on:
– Flow
– Grammar
– Do you think it’s publishable?
– Does it keep your interest?
– Who is the most relatable character?
– BONUS – If you have a younger sibling in grades 3 and 4 please read this to them (or have them read it) and give feedback.
Thank you so much guys!
Here is the doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w9Tj5_RImpZl61iZAdlJ1uSYp5eRatp_1zkoRG-aoeM/edit?usp=sharing