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@katja-r

I love the great work you are putting into this amazing story. It’s keeping me on the edge of my seat and I can’t wait for more!

I also loved how you changed it so dramatically. I don’t think any of us were expecting the character change. But that is amazing.

I personally didn’t see anything that could have been better (yeah it was SUPER good!) but since the whole reason you posted this story on here is so that people could give you critique, I’m sure somebody will be able to help you (because I kinda didn’t)

I love this! Again, keep up the great work!

-Melody