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  • lydia-writes replied to the topic Post Poems Here —> in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago

    my heart goes out to you
    despite all that you’ve done
    because I know what it’s like
    being/to be in a dark room
    with no light
    and I can understand
    why you think
    that tearing down the walls
    of people’s vibrant rooms
    will/can let the light into yours

    Any critique would be welcome 🙂  And I was wondering what words separated by a / work better

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