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Lona replied to the topic Feedback 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
*takes paper, uttering incoherent exclamations of happiness and bouncing up and down like a sugar-high toddler. “Thank youuuuu!” Proceeds to devour paper’s contents. *
Yeah, I’ve always been kind of annoyed how people make death this terrible, horrifyingly evil thing, so… in my fictional universe it’s just not haha. 😛
The creatures and Man and Woman have a land (actually a planet, but same difference haha) that Life and Death chose for them. With Life and Death’s help they (the creatures and Man and Woman) turn it into a more livable, and overall more pleasant place to live.
Thank you so much! That means a lot! 😀
My goodness…*facepalm* How did I miss 3 -eds in one sentence? That has to be a record.
Oh, you’re right that does make it sound more clear. Thanks!
No worries! You came across very well-meaning and helpful.
And what are you taking about? From what I can tell you definitely know your stuff. 😀












