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Hey guys, I’ve just finished going through the draft again. The ending is slightly different, and a bit about the bracelet has been moved to the beginning, so if you want to check it out and see what you think?

@bama-rose @cassandraia @eden-anderson @noahlitle @germaine-han

@bama-rose I think what I’m using are em dashes, and I’m using them correctly (thank goodness). En dashes are used for numbers (210-211). I found some links below, and they’re really helpful:

https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/em-dash.html

https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/en-dash.html