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@kb-writer

I’m literally trying to catch my breath right now!

So here are some random thoughts.  I think this is cool idea and I love your thoughts 😀 This was entertaining and relatable and had a quick pace that I super liked.  The one thing I had a hard time with was following you through and understanding what you were saying.  Maybe this was just me, but some of the cuts in the middle of sentences seemed a little too abrupt.  Maybe that’s really what you want.  I don’t know.  These are just some things I struggled with when reading and they just left me breathless and mind boggled for a bit.  At other points, though, your breaks were amazing and really well done.  Is there anything in particular that you were wondering about?