Kylie S. Pierce

Re-write of Chapter 4.

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AALIYAH’S POV

As the fangs came into the clearing, I listened to what they were saying before I attacked.

“I say we give up.” A gray fang said in his gravelly voice. “We’re not going to find the girl. She snuck into the Deeps and killed twenty of us and snuck out…[Read more]

Ah. Sorry guys, about the short chapter. I wrote it on my mom’s phone, and it looked longer on there. Sorry!

AALIYAH’S POV

As the fangs came into the clearing, I listened to what they were saying before I attacked.

“I say we give up.” A gray fang said in his gravelly voice. “We’re not going to find the girl. She snuck into the Deeps and killed 20 fangs and snuck out again. Who’s to say she won’t find us before we find her!”
I knew the Wingfeathers we…[Read more]

EMBERYN’S POV

I felt fear. Amberley would have known what to do about Macha. She was always the authority on myths and legends, while I was more of a math and science person. All of us in Communal A were silent for a moment, then a clone came into the room. “Emberyn, your sister is about to ‘wake.” I jumped up and dashed to Communal B. Amberle…[Read more]

LEELI’S POV

Leeli raised her whistleharp to her lips and played Call of the Moonraiders. The melody swirled around the hall, and the owls shrieked, and fell back. Leeli got the impression that if they could cover their ears, they would gladly do so. Ahsoka had reached one of the strange men she had come back with, and given Amberley to him. The…[Read more]

JANNER’S POV

Janner was running from the Owl-Lady, when he heard Emberyn scream “AMBERLEY!” and turned in time to see the paralyzed girl slide off of Fang’s back, unconscious. She hit the stone floor, and lay there, motionless. Leeli, who was on Fang, paused and nudged the boarhound towards Amberley, but Fang disagreed, backed up, and darted…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@wingiby-iggby

I know! I’m so sorry about that!! I only saw your post until after I posted mine, and then I was frantically trying to edit before I had to leave! I only had a few minutes, and, therefore, wasn’t able to think straight — otherwise I would just have erased the whole silly post and been done with it! *face-palms* Anywa…

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AMBERLEY’S POV

As I fell into unconsciousness, I could hear shouting. “Amberley!” Someone yelled, and all turned to black. Then came the dreams.

*Flashback*

I was seven, laughing, wheeling after my brother, who was running ahead, yelling “Come and get me!” My parents came out of the office, smiling with tears in their eyes. “Amberley, you’re…[Read more]

P.S. Amberley just passed out, not turned to stone, because when this was started, I think I said if a villain (or villainess) has magic, it’s not gonna work exactly the same in the Castle. So Macha still has power, but it’s not gonna be the same as in her own world.

AMBERLEY’S POV

I look up when we hear screaming. People fly past, and I catch  a glimpse of a boy with bright blue eyes. Then we start running. Fang darts past Leeli and I hold out my hand and grab her, pulling her onto the gigantic dog. I hate to abandon my wheelchair, but I have no choice. From the way people are scattering, I’d say it’s my…[Read more]

Scratch that post.

@wingiby-iggiby

Hehe. Maybe we should have talked it over before posting. 😛

JANNER’S POV

Janner was curious about these newcomers. They had to be twins, with that wavy dark hair and brown eyes that were flecked with gold. Flecked with gold, almost like Kal’s when he was a fang. He sighed, then smiled to see Leeli and Amberley chatting away. It was nice for Leeli to talk to someone who had a similar disability. But st…[Read more]

@winter_rose

Wonderful entrance for Macha!

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AMBERLEY’S POV

I grinned as I rode along on Fang. Emberyn was right, it was similar to riding Thunder. Leeli eyes had lit up when I said she could ride in my ‘chair, and she was bouncing slightly as her brother pushed her along. “So,” I s…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Just looked at your signature. IT’S IN LATIN!!! Thank you for that! Ok, it means…

Always where under where (???)

Can you please explain that?

Hey, I’m going to write from 1st person for Amberley and Emberyn because I need to work on that.

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EMBERYN’S POV

I wasn’t sure what to think of this. Where were we, who were these people, and why were we here? Amberley probably had many of the same reservations as I did, but she was…[Read more]

And yeah, I we should use the Song of the Sea Macha, as it’s the version I know best.