Third chapter.

-Katja

Second chapter.

-Katja

Here you go!!

-Katja

Here are some names. Let me know if you don’t like them and I will try better next time.

These names I couldn’t find their meanings. They are also kinda more fantasy than medieval:
Koberic
Veldor
Dion
Gathar
Kiall
Derald
Iphan

A little more medieval:
Brewstere: Warrior; man
Cockse: Bold
Bronsone: Guard of his wealth

A few more without…[Read more]

Here are a few first names:

Jolyon or Julian
Kai
Marin
Alon
Adrian
Dylan

I was trying to find shorter first names. Let me know if you don’t like any of these and I’ll find some new ones.

Last Names: I just copied the meanings people said, so if they sound a little weird, it’s not from me. 😀

Alvarado: I couldn’t really…[Read more]

Thanks! I have really enjoyed it so far!!

@abigail-rebekah

I know! I really like writing about some of the harder things that happened during WWII. I am having stuff about the concentration camps in my current WWII story. I don’t have everything planned but I have some really good ideas.

I will tag you! And please leave your comments…[Read more]

Yeah, I’ve written out a little bit, but none of it is that amazing. Really? I’ve only been writing seriously for like 8 months. I started this story almost 2 months ago. I really like my plan for this story. I’ve gone into like in depth planning. One thing I do is plan out, in on sentence, what I want to happen in each…[Read more]

Ok thanks! Will do! I will send those names either tonight or tomorrow. Sorry for the delay.

@beth20

I will try to get your name soon as well.

Sorry this is taking me so long. Today was a bit busy. (It’s a Monday :D)

-Katja

It’s pretty good! The only thing I was wondering is that it almost sounded as if she was gonna jump of and kill herself. Like is she thinking about committing suicide? Maybe that is what you were trying to tell and I’m just weird enough to not understand, but yeah.

-Katja

I just found a bunch of first names that had a meaning to do with the sea and then I realized you wanted his last name to have that meaning. Do you still want the last name to have something to do with the sea? I can change it, just let me know.

-Katja

Thanks, yes that does help. I’ll send you some names in a bit. Also do you want his name to start with any particular letters?

-Katja

That’s awesome! I have a few friends who are an MK. One is in Kenya and the other is in Cambodia.

That’s cool! I’m working on the a low fantasy novel. I am still working on making a good synopsis…I have everything planned and I can write out my whole plot in two sentences but to make a synopsis that is interesting to…[Read more]

Hopefully he will be able to fix it soon!

-Katja

Lol. No, I thought you were saying I said something weird. Haha. I had let Josiah know about the glitches, but he might not have had a chance to look at it yet.

-Katja

I will take a peek and let you know if I come up with anything. And I can’t see your post unless I look at my email. So yeah, I’ll do my best to come up with something.

-Katja

What did I say that was weird? I don’t remember and can’t see it. Lol.

-Katja

Thanks for your comments. For some reason I can’t get to the second page on here either. Is this just me?

I am glad you pointed those things out! I will fix them as soon as I’m free!

Thanks again!

-Katja

What time period is he in? Can you describe him a bit more? Does he have family or is he by himself? How old is he?

I will look through my name lists!!

-Katja

Hey! Nice to meet you!

Thanks, I really like my picture too!!

I hope you don’t mind if I ask you a few questions so I can get to know you better! 😉

Where are you from? Are you working on writing anything right now? Have you posted anything you’ve written? If so, can you tag me?

I look forward to getting to know you!

-Katja

For some reason I can’t get to the second page, but I read your comments in the email. Thank you so much for pointing those things out. I’ll see what I can do!

-Katja

Thanks for your comments!

I kinda wanted things a little slower, but I’ll see if I can change a few things!

I appreciate your tips!!

-Katja

Hey!

It’s never to late to make new friends! Thanks for dropping in!

Thanks! I like my pic too. 😀

Well, actually I used to think WWII was kinda boring, but my brother go me hooked on it. He would always write any history research paper on WWII. I started getting interested not long ago. It also helps me that I have a brother…[Read more]

Cool! I’ll keep that place in mind. 😉

Haha…hope Marek can control his need for daggers. 😀

Thanks! I love my forum signature too!!

Sure, I’d love to read some of your poems!

Wow! Thanks for telling me about your characters! And no, it wasn’t a info overload. (well except when I tried to read it when I was busy.) It’s super…[Read more]

Oh yes!! I forgot all about that one. Lol. One Night With the King was pretty awesome! I watched it so many times! It was one of my favorite Christian movies. There is a book about it? Well, besides the Bible? I’ll have to look it up sometime. Thanks for joining out discussion!

-Katja

Yeah!!! Whenever I watch or read a book that portrays other countries as heartless I automatically have a lower regard for it before even finishing it. Now, yes, I do get that in some cases other countries were and are mean, but that doesn’t apply to everyone in every situation. I really appreciate movies and stories that actually…[Read more]

Ok, so I wasn’t saying they weren’t bad. But that most movies don’t portray them like having a heart. Midway had a Japanese naval commander who willingly died on his ship. Just the fact that they showed them as having feelings too. And it was also cool how they followed this one Japanese dude when they went to the Japanese side. I…[Read more]

Yeah, I just tagged some people so we could get a conversation started. Anyone can join this discussion!

That’s cool! My brother used to write a lot of music before he got so busy with his job. 😀 I like making songs up on my instruments but not actually composing or anything.

Well, I have to go, but it was nice chatting with you!

-Katja

Wow! I just read your poem. That was really good! I have been and always will be bad at writing poems. It doesn’t really interest me. I like story writing. Anyways, yeah, your poem was really good!

-Katja

Wow! I guess I’ll have to change my perspective on Texas.

That’s cool that Marek likes daggers. Just tell him to be happy with what he has.

Who is your favorite character that you’ve written?

-Katja

Hey!

Yeah, your name is really awesome!

Oh, I just like cool stuff…if that makes sense. I live in Wisconsin and a lot of us are big on guns here and yeah, I think it’d be cool to have a dagger.

Sometimes I envy my characters. They can kill all the people they don’t like and I can’t. 😀

Wow, @emberynus-the-dragonsl…[Read more]

Strings breaking and bow rehairing is normal. Dropping your violin on the floor and getting giant cracks in it is not normal. 😀

Ok yeah, tag me when you find it.

Really! I have a couple friends in Texas and my brother was thinking about moving out there. Although I’m not sure he was totally serious, but yeah. I just enjoy…[Read more]

Ooo, Lindsey Stirling!! I love her music!! I’ve listened to some of David Garrett’s music too.

Violin is sooooo fun! I love it so much. I used to play from like preschool to 2nd grade and then I had to stop because renting the violin was costing a lot of money (partly cuz I kept breaking my violin). But then in 8th grade I got…[Read more]

Yay!!! I’m glad to hear that. Yeah, tag me when you do.

For some reason I can’t get to page 2. The only way I know what you said is by the email…I don’t know why I can’t view it. 🙁

-Katja

Haha, yeah I understand. I can be a perfectionist in some things but not usually in my writing. 😀

Claire, I know I’ve told you before, but you should really post some of your stories. It’ll help you a lot. I’ve been super helped by your guy’s comments and I’m positive you would be too! Just something to think about. 😉

-Katja

Yeah, I tend to use a lot of the same words over and over again. I’m working on fixing that. 🙂

I’ll read it again and see what I can do to simplify it.

Thanks for pointing those things out!

-Katja

Oh, when you said I Can Only Imagine it reminded me of my grandma. The night she died, we all knew she had minutes left and we played the song I Can Only Imagine in the hospital and at her funeral. Sorry, when you said that it just reminded me of her.

Everyone keeps talking about Beyond the Mask and so I was finally able to…[Read more]

That’s cool! Do you like the violin? I love how much stuff you can do with it. It’s one of my favorite instruments.

-Katja

Welcome and yes you can join!

I think I may have seen that movie, although I’m not really sure. I’m glad it was a challenge to you.

That’s cool! You write music?

I love those movies that challenge and change the way people think. We definitely need more of those.

Feel free to share any other thoughts!

-Katja

Thanks for pointing those things out. Originally I had written this chapter in present tense and then after I wrote it I changed it to past. So, yeah, I probably missed a few things.

Yeah, I didn’t really like the part about him going inside. I’m going to fix in eventually.

I’ll see what I can do.

Sure, I’ll change that…[Read more]

Lol, I seriously had to go back to the first page to remember what this discussion was about. 😀

-Katja

Lol. I actually thought Macalester was easier to remember and pronounce, but I’m kinda used to unique names. (I mean my name is different (; ) But it’s up to you Grace. I don’t really have an argument for Macalester other than that I think it sounds good with Damien. Sometimes I change the name a bit, so even if you did Damien…[Read more]

It was super awesome to meet you all!! I’ve enjoyed our chats as well

-Katja

Personally I like Macalester best, but it’s up to you.

-Katja

Thanks so much!!!

-Katja

Wow! Thanks so much!!

I haven’t read it all yet, but it looks very helpful. Thanks again for sending it.

-Katja

By the way guys, I just realized that I made it to 100 comments in less then a week! Thanks for befriending me!!

Haha. 😀 It’s true. If I ever meet anyone who doesn’t like Sherlock Holmes I’d be super surprised. (Now watch, I’ll probably meet someone who doesn’t)

The Enola Holmes were a bit big on having her be super powerful, like a super girl I guess, but they were still fun to read.

-Katja

Here is chapter 2.

-Katja