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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Thanks. Just so you know things change in the next chapter, so don’t go trying to guess. 😀
Ok, I think I get what your saying. But she wasn’t necessarily afraid when she was talking with him, I would say more upset that the soldiers where beating him. If that makes sense? Just let me know what you think I could have done better.
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