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@this-is-not-an-alien,

Very good (and enthralling)! Before I make any suggestions, tho, would you like me to edit for typos or anything, or just for clarity/inconsistencies and the like?

(Also, it’s a little hard to tell where paragraphs end and where they start with the format of SE. Maybe you could add a link to the PDF or something?)

Yeah, I think it’s time for Lytt to go. I have several other half-man creatures that I could bring in, tho, including another with wings. 🙂 Will give options in a sec. 🙂