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@andrew I like the humor in it. 😉 I do agree with The Fledgling Artist that you could use a few less ellipses. Another suggestion I do have, would be coming up with a different food item other than ‘pasta’ that Nightjay teaches Susan how to make; since pasta would be an Earth dish that was created there, and he’s from another world. That’s just me though, no need to change it if you don’t want to. 🙂