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@tabitha

thank you so much for reading and helping me with it! your comments were really helpful! Yes, there were some context things, I think, that would be confusing. but I’m glad there wasn’t anything vital that was confusing. Semiramis was hurt for a moment cause Aefflaed thought her older than she was, but it passed quickly. And yeah… Hanniumm is first introduced in the book as a general – in fact, one of the three top generals in the nation.

and… I’m glad you think the exposition was earned for the tannink’esh. I will try to condense them… but it is a unique, original creature, so describing it efficiently was… difficult. =) For the other two, I had base animals that easily compared them to, but the tannink’esh is entirely unique… (my world’s version of a dragon. =) )