Mr.Trip Williams

Ku’Aya

My heart was in the pit of my stomach, my ears were burning, and my stomach was caught up in my throat. What was wrong with me? I can’t believe I actually asked him to marry me! I’d have squealed in embarrassment if it wouldn’t have made it worse.

“I can’t file houses!” Ehud hollered stiffly. From the jagged hair line, across from ear t…[Read more]

A few ideas for you….

– spooked guards and rumors spread about seeing things in the night while your mc overhears

– bring the ghost in stages… perhaps your ghost is just figuring out how to interact, so that’s where the stages come in; for example, perhaps at first your mc gets flashes of cold randomly. of course the mc would think nothing…[Read more]

awesome!  and a well written post! I liked how you portrayed the dance, her worries, and her euphoria in the perfect moment.

@e-n-leonard

I can just post it here real quick. then anyone else who wants to look at it can as well if they wish. =)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qkFnMaYylWtV0TuCIqZsEq4QaBKswWpt5VW1l11QM48/edit?usp=sharing

thanks for being willing to take a glance at it for me!

Abirami

Ophelia and Isaias danced across the stage. They were so elegant!

They were so close!

My cheeks burned. Isaias lifted Ophelia so gracefully, and she flew through the air, but I wasn’t transfixed by the flight. I was transfixed by how close they were. There was barely any space between them.

I’d never been that close to a woman before.…[Read more]

Awesome.

@e-n-leonard

I’d say the favorite name I’ve given a character… that’s a hard one. Probably still say Setti. Not only is his name’s meaning fitting, but Setti is ancient Egyptian and is another name for Seth.

Setti’s parents were named Asur and Iside. Asur is another name for Osiris, and Iside is the Italian name for Isis, the…[Read more]

Abirami

The glass spoke of allowing the dance, providing food, and then having to reveal your worst regrets.

The food part sounded alright, but revealing ones worst regret? Was that the castle’s form of payment for services rendered?

I shrugged. I could see it being problematic for some here. No way Ku would be willing, but I had already owned…[Read more]

Ugg! Good trip, but got COVID upon returning… good now. =) but that’s why I’ve been away…. whew! have a LOT to catch up with!!!

@inkhorn

haha! too funny! the signs and the glass message were great!

lol. well, seeing as the castle did provide a stage… forced to relive it in front of everyone would be fitting and sounds like something…[Read more]

@calidris

Emily summed it up. I say go for it.

So many great things happening. =)

However… I’m out of town at a barbershop convention ( =)  #smorgaschorus  !!!) so I won’t be able to post anything till later next week…. but I’m looking forward to it. hehe. both continuing the awkward crush/love/friend convo between ku and Ehud, as well as t…[Read more]

XDDDD what a great turn of phrase. lol

Abirami’s turn… (cheesy grin with slanted eyes)

Abirami

The door, if you could call it that anymore, was all but shredded as I pushed it open and entered the room that had previously been infested with Ku’s hive.

I marveled at the destruction that mere bugs could do. Just a few months ago, Ku’s hive had successfully committed what amounted to…[Read more]

….. and yes. That IS Abirami standing next to her… just as a size reference here. lol.

(Ami is Ku’Aya’s nickname for Abirami)

Ku’Aya

“Whoa! Cool green skin!” the boy called out!

My ears tingled. So… cute!

He had a baby face with blazing blond hair. His bangs stuck out half-hazardly about, and I had to wonder how he got his hair to stay that way… like an organized mess that actually looked really good.

My hair was the wor…[Read more]

and he’s usually not so serious, but at the time, he is training to try to help Abirami break a war general (and old friend of his dad’s) from the castle dungeons. And Setti is using his dad’s weapon of choice…

Oh, and this is Setti… in case I ever bring him into the castle…. (bad rendition of him, but best I could come up with from the website I use… the ears and hair are all wrong… but it gives the gist of it.)

Warning… some of this is me rambling, so skim over if you want… =)

This is SO AWESOME! lol. Funny how it’s possible to geek out over a character castle. hehe.

@rose-colored-fancy

This seems like an incredible and wonderful dynamic! Lots of great character development potential there! Just reading that small bit, I want to know what…[Read more]

hahahah! Awesome that you said that, cause I was thinking if Ehud is good with her green skin and isn’t put off by her bugs, Ku might just ask him to marry her. lol. joking only slightly there.

hahaha! I laughed so hard at Ehud’s reactions! I really like him!

Abirami

Ku’s hand clung to my arm with stars in her eyes. If I didn’t know…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

haha. I’m glad you liked it! I thought you might get a kick out of him being thrown. Lol. When I wrote it, scenes from League of Extraordinary Gentlemen were flashing through my head.  I’m glad I didn’t write anything out of character for him.

ROFL! Hahahaha! That’s so true! Oh, that’s sad. He does seem to jump…[Read more]

then Avin saved me by using an elixir (either mine or you borrowed Enydd’s) and I then went to save Ku….

@emily-waldorf

ooh… should have been more clear. (pouty sad face.) my bad. Yeah, I save you two in my post when you dove into the water, cause the bugs would have swarmed above you (so my rationale went) and you could only hold your breath so long, so I swallowed you up by transforming into a massive, huge worm, then broke a hole in the wall…[Read more]