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Jane Maree replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota Ahhh I loved it!
The only thing that threw me off was the line “Ev’ry joy and each sorrow of my soul” — it seemed really long in comparison to the others. That said, if put to music it can still work fine, so it’s not necessarily an issue. 😛












