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  • J.A.Penrose replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago

    @writercatherine Oh my woooord. That’s priceless.

    @silverclaw-bonnetfolly Ooooh, cool! (And go girl! That’s a lot of words in a day. I average about 1700.)

    @esjohnson Woot! Keep it up! Is this more on Talisman? Your Pinterest board there is so insane.

    @steward-of-the-pen Nice, and keep it up! (Haha, to be fair, I’m spending 6 hours a day at school doing creative writing. Only problem is all of the schoolwork has to be edited and refined. So time consuming.) And great snippet!

    @julia XD That is great! *sips chai possessively*

     

    So, NaNo is on : 31 227

    Total is : 39 850

    We’re getting there guys!

    My favourite part in this lot is:

    Opia leant forward, pushing aside the holo-doc. “Ty. Sometimes you need to do…unpleasant things for the good of others. That’s just the way of things.”

    No. No it isn’t. I pressed a fist against my forehead, trying to block Opia’s words out—so similar to Sharlo’s. Using each other’s logic to kill each other with a clean conscious.

    So why couldn’t I do the same? Why couldn’t I just use that logic? It had to be right…didn’t it?

    A hand touched my arm and I flinched away. “I can’t,” my voice came out in a strangled gasp, “I can’t help you.”

    Her eyes widened and she backed away. A pressure built up in my throat and I tore my gaze away, turning to stride out.

    Time to tell Sharlo my decision:

    If neither side was going to relent, then I was starting my own.

    (Welp. More than a sentence, but none of the lines are great by themselves.)

     

    Everyone is doing so well! We may have this, guys! *throws confetti* GO PARIMI ALCA!!!!

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