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*notes down to do the next guild lesson on managing to weave in character description without over clogging the story and making it chunky and poorly paced*

Yup! Pretty much what @steward-of-the-pen said. I’ll add a few more things on Monday and expand it out a bit. You can then add in a snippet there and we can help you out! I agree though, character descriptions can be tough to get in there. Even Tolkien seemed to think so. (Hence we have very little info on what Legolas looks like. In fact, there is a debate regarding whether or not he actually has black hair.)

So hopefully I’ll be able to get a decent lesson done for Monday!