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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic My first story in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@e-jo3 Sure thing! I’ll open it in a doc to make the critiquing easier.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IIGPFH8qomiks13ftbshxxpa9wKNkBCE6Q4yafKX2kw/edit?usp=sharing
Should be free to look at it on the bus this morning!












