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@wishingwell13 I AM SO SORRY!

Okay, heads up, next time, see if you can tag me into things. I’ll be the most likely person to be around, and I should be able to get back to you, and get some others over here as well. I’ve just been rather busy because of multiple exams, assessments and other such things. You can tag me by copy and pasting ‘ @j-a-penrose ‘ into a post. Then I can get other people to help out. Thanks @Steward-of-the-pen for stepping in for your really distracted Guildmaster.

Onwards to all that I have missed out on.

Out of interest, what exactly were you after feedback and help on?

Oh! I like it! I’m really interested to see where it goes. *nodnod*

Over all, it’s looking really good, and is certainly a way to drag the reader into the story. you’ve developed a really unique character voice, and you’ve managed to foreshadow the plot pretty nicely, setting it up for the rest of the novel to take place.

Just for a bit of help (prologue-wise) the latest Guild lesson was on…PROLOGUES! So, if you want, you can hop over and check it out right here.