Inkhorn

ENYDD

My heart was thudding in my chest.

Deep breaths. Deep breaths.

I’ve been attacked by bugs and swallowed by a giant worm. Seeing a fight that I wasn’t even part of shouldn’t be stressful.

Yet here I was, practically collapsing into a chair with every nerve worn thin. I leaned back into my chair, trying to think happy thoughts. Celebrating…[Read more]

@lady-grace

It would be great to meet your characters!
The main problem with putting in four characters at the same time is that I’m not sure that there are enough open characters to interact with.

I do have one character who is not interacting with anyone right now, so if you want, one of your characters can talk with her (when you drop h…[Read more]

@calidris

I step back.  I’m not sure what I’d do if he tried pulling that on me, but I don’t think it’d be pleasant.  Is it ok to slap a kid?  It certainly sounds awful, but so is touching people without permission.

XD Conroy does seriously need discipline.

@jared-williams

It’s so sweet to see Abirami slowly adopting Conroy. 🙂

CONROY…[Read more]

CONROY

A woman walked up to me and gave me a small smile. I smiled back, making note of her curly hair, brown eyes, and how eerily similar her clothes were to an Extranei. However, there were multiple other people who were wearing foreign clothes as well. But then it could be to blend in. Or it could be to distract me the actual traitor.

“I d…[Read more]

@calidris

Would you like to do an interaction between Val and Conroy?

That would be great! Though be warned, Conroy has been trained to constantly ask questions about everything he notices, and he isn’t exactly tactful about it. 😅

@ethan-leonard

It’d be great to have a new character!

I’ll give you a quick rundown of my other character in the castle, Enydd.

Enydd is in her twenties and has a laidback personality that conflicts with the short spurts of anger that show up when she is under stress. She also is heavily burdened with guilt over a decision that cut her off from…[Read more]

@everyone

I’m dropping in another character who was in the Character Castle 2.0. To those who were in that castle, he has gone through such a personality/pretty much everything change so that he is unrecognizable. XD

Conroy Flinston

Age: around 8-10 (I know, I know, he was in his twenties before, but plans change, drastically in this case…[Read more]

*rushes in and is relieved to find that things haven’t changed much*

@calidris

I think I’m going too drop Basil in again sometime. He’s changed a lot since he was last in here – I’ve finally nailed his backstory and motivations, so that’s changed, but he’s no less of an annoying brat XD

I’d love to see Basil again (never mind that I saw very li…[Read more]

@calidris

I think all the characters won’t be too keen on talking about their decision. I was thinking that maybe if they refused, the castle would either tell everyone what the decision was (basically narrating it in the most sarcastic, humiliating, guilt laying tone possible), or the castle would show everyone the character making his decision,…[Read more]

@calidris

goodness that is a fantastic challenge!  I can’t wait!

Thanks! Now I’m desperately trying to figure out the premise of Enydd’s decision. XD Oh goodness…this castle is doing wonders for Enydd, meaning that as an author I now have even more work to do for her.

Enydd: I couldn’t let you get away with making me a joyful, wise character wh…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Enydd will be eternally grateful to Abirami for grabbing her bag. XD (I actually had no idea why she loved the bag and rock so much when I wrote it though I understand it better now XD)

Maybe Enydd can stumble on a dining room or even better the dining room has a stage in it!

Have a good time at your…[Read more]

@calidris

That did help!

I’m okay with you dropping that character in the Castle. 🙂

@calidris

First, I must say that I really appreciate that you’re asking for our input on this topic. 🙂

I have a few questions that I’d like to ask for clarity’s sake. I’d like to know what your views on this subject are. Do you view homosexuality as a sin or as something to be embraced and accepted? You said that you were writing this from a…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Aw thank you!!! He’s one of my favorites to write he’s really cutee

Oh for the bow you need something light enough to work with your hair’s weight, stiff enough to pop and long enough to have the whispies, you might have to experiment with your own hair length and thickness you can get these on amazon for ten dollars and t…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH POOR ENYDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I swear that nothing that just happened is my doing! Enydd was the one who decided to have a dark-not-so-dark side to her!!! I only meant for her to be happy-go-lucky and all smiles and innocence! *points accusing finger at Enydd* She brought this upon herself! *sigh* XD

Also, I…[Read more]

ENYDD

Where was everyone getting all their energy? I was exhausted. Finished. Worn out. On the verge of collapsing. And collapse I did. Well, sank to my knees if I want to be more accurate.

I hugged my legs to my chest in an effort to stop my shaking. How was everyone else so calm? You would think that being chased by infuriated, over-protective…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

I don’t think that two more people would be overwhelming though if you decide to pick only one, I think you should choose Natalya Yuri.

ENYDD

“Here is about as good as any place.” Avin replied, almost coldly. He hurriedly added, “I like the woods too. I used to call them home, if you can believe that.”

I smiled uncertainly. “I guess I can see- What on earth?” I whimpered.

“Everyone get back! Get out of the room!” someone yelled.

I wished I could obey their practical o…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

🙂 And I also want to thank you for your review of my dystopian plot idea. It was very helpful. 🙂 (One can never use too many smiley face emojis XD)

ENYDD

A man (How old is Avin? I’m guessing mid- thirties to early forties) moved towards me as one would towards a frightened animal. My lips quirked upward. I must look terrified.…[Read more]