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GabrielWoods replied to the topic “Which You Have Ordained” Critique in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
@taylorclogston I think that you should mention more of his surroundings, and maybe something about the service. Perhaps have him think that something the pastor said would contradict his secret.
but I think that you wouldn’t necessarily have to add anything. It’s up to you












