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Hey Parimis!

What’s up. (:

Well, I’ve been working on a short story for a contest and I was hoping for some feedback since I don’t write short stories that much.

It’s called The Year of the Daisy and is short (haha, most of my short stories aren’t short but this one had a word limit xD) It’s about 2500 words. Okay 2498. ;P

Anyways, I would really appreciate comments and thoughts and suggestions on grammar/plot/prose etc.

Here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G7M0gSh7HoaghO_vrvISZvbIwlrOblNnSuHMApWIDVE/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks!
~ evelyn ~

(Tagging a couple peeps: @julia @j-a-penrose @taylorclogston @cassie-hartfinh @pursuewisdom @steward-of-the-pen @everyone-else :))