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Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
So I wrote a poem last night, and I was hoping for some feedback about it. I write a lot of poetry late at night when I have trouble falling asleep, and lately I’ve been messing around with a sweet and simple feel portraying things a young child would go through or do throughout their day.
I like to sing to my Grandma,
She likes to hear my tune,
I beat my can for the drum,
And stomp through the room.
I sing it loud,
I sing it dancing,
I sing it proud,
I sing it prancing,
When the parade is finely over,
She says that I’m the best,
And gives me cake or cookies
For while I take my rest.
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