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  • Erynne replied to the topic Trying to make my MC more likeable in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago

    @arindown

    That helps a ton! Thank you so much!!

    Or (if I’ve got the story right) she could be a really protective friend, and feel really worried and responsible for her friends who are trying to save her.

    You got the story spot on. She tries to convince her friends not to leave, but she knows that’s the only way to save her and that her friends weren’t going to change their minds. I’m honestly glad I’ve described my story well enough that you were able to pick that up with out me saying it 😀

    I would also encourage you to watch some of Abbie Emmons.

    I watch her all the time! At least I used to, I need to go look at her channel again. Yes, I totally agree she can be cringy at times (I really wish she would watch her language) but she has really good advice sometimes!

    Thanks again for the ideas! I will definitely be using those!

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