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@anne_the_noob14 Thank you!!

@sir-leeds I appreciate your feedback! What I’m actually trying to convey is a process of healing over the course of a year. As the seasons go by (with similar themes in each), the girl becomes more and more reconciled. In that light, what changes to you think should happen? Maybe what’s happening in the last section (fall) is too arbitrary to mean “mostly healed.” Also, with healing as the theme, does that make the last stanza fit any better in your eyes?

Would you elaborate on what you mean by “embellished?” I’m not sure I know what you/they mean.