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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
“Why do you want to save her? She doesn’t deserve it!” “Who are you to decide what she deserves?” Aydin retorted. “Did you forget what she did?” I held out my hands, half in entreaty, half to remind him of the scars over my palms and wrists. Aydin gestured with his right hand, as though to remind me in his turn. “I won’t ever be able to forget,” he said, quietly. “That doesn’t change that it’s right.”Gotta say I love this!
Also, I just saw your (?) idea of making the captive someone that the characters hate/are afraid of. I think that could be really cool! (Already is, obviously). I might have to jump to Quin/Qatar at the end of the book, so we’ll see how this goes. 🙂 It shouldn’t be too much of a jump, but if any of you notice character development, please tell me–it would encourage me so much!
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