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@anne_the_noob14 – Lol, if you liked her I can’t imagine what you’d think of my MC. 😛 But it’s not her fault. She’s a good person, and doing what she thinks is right. Remember, her only role model for the past six years was the most evil man on the planet, who’s been lying to her and manipulating her, so…yeah. xD

The more we go on, the more I like Lucas. His backstory seems very intriguing, and I love how protective he is of Caedon even though he’s resolved not to get attached. It’s so sweet.

@christlover – As kind of explained above, Racleva is more of a redemption-arc type of villain. She’s not pure evil, just misled. Thanks to the emperor’s lies, she thinks the ‘enemy’ are hurting innocent people, and she wants to stop that. Oops! Sorry for messing up Theseus’ name.

Just a little note for the future…Racleva’s been going by the name of Vladlena since she started working for the emperor, so she would be very used to saying it and going by it. 🙂

You did a good job with Racleva’s reaction to Runawin. She’d definitely pull out her sword at the sight of a strange wolf lurking around.

@ariella-newheart – Yes, I think it’s possible for Caedon to get to know her better. In fact, I just realized this, but he reminds her of her older brother the last time she saw him. And the fact that he can soothe animals with elvish is so cool.

@steward-of-the-pen – I love Runawin’s arrival, and how you described things in her point of view so well (especially the humans. That was hilarious.) She seems like such a pleasant wolf. I can’t wait to know more about her!

Just a heads up, I have an idea for what room they should go to next, but I don’t have time to write it right now. It’ll either be later tonight, or tomorrow.