E.Jo3

lol I can totally understand that XD

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(Hmm)

Bo’ and Ivaylo continued on in the underground system.

they soon found Gryphon waiting for them near an closed door above his head.

Bo’ gave the Trooper a small smile as they reached him.

Ivaylo nodded, “this should be it.”

The three then began their assent into the castle.

Solstice’s hand drifted toward her lightsaber hilt. Something was coming, something bad… the sense of foreboding grew and spread throughout her body before a sudden explosion of warning shot through her mind.

“Everyone down!” Solstice screamed just as laser fire erupted from the trees.

Five round metal contraptions dropped from the treetop…[Read more]

(I think Jak and Zak were with Zeinli’s group, but XD I guess it doesn’t matter :P)

Will kept a tight hold on the vines that kept the wolf guy captive. Every once in a while the guy would give a low growl, and Will had to shrug away a chill going down his spine.

Noaa and Cresh stuck close together, guns at the ready. Cresh still eyed Jaina…[Read more]

Solstice fidgeted nervously with one of her braids. She bit her lip and motioned Jak and Zak over.
“I want you to get up in a tree and survey the area every few minutes,” she told them. The inseparable pair nodded, and Jak quickly scaled a tree and scanned the group’s surroundings.

“What was that all about?” Jaina asked. Solstice shrugged.…[Read more]

Sry I took so long

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Jaina and her crew pressed on, even with a prisoner in tow.

Steady would glance back at the wolf guy every once in a while, distrust in his eyes, and waryness on his face underneath his helmet.

Reel stood at the ready with his gun poised, looking forward to the destruction of more droids.

(Sry it’s very anticlimactic XD)

With a wild cry Prince Akee leapt forward and tackled the head enemy wolf-person.
“You traitors!” He cried. Akee and the leader fell to the ground, wrestling savagely.

Zeinli and Goane moved forward and brandished their lightsabers at the wolf-people. The rebels hesitated and crouched down at the slight of the intimidating weapons.

Rookie gri…[Read more]

Goane and his group jumped over the wall and landed in the midst of a sea of battledroids.

He ignited his saber, gripping it in between his fingers in his unusual way. His team immediately thinned out the droids with the help of a flank of clones and wolf people coming from the other side of the streets.

Then bombs went off, coming from nowhere.…[Read more]

Rookie hefted his blaster and tried to calm his nerves. He nearly tripped over a stone in his state of excitement. Zeinli looked to him and smiled reassuringly.

“Don’t worry, Rookie,” she said, and softly touched his shoulder. Immediately a sense of calm overtook his body.

“Yes, ma’am, and, uh, thanks,” Rookie said, and then looked up to the g…[Read more]

Yeppers XD hehe

thanks for understanding.

……

Zeinli’s team, along with the prince and his people, all made their way to the walls of the city.

Zeinli glanced at her Padawan, who had gotten quiet. He furrowed his brows in thought.

“Goane?”

he looked up, “Jaina just told me they have a prisoner.”

Zeinli understood the mental bond that the…[Read more]

Ooo, mysterious.😉

I totally understand about writing others’ characters. And thanks! I’m really glad I’ve been able to write yours well. Let me know if you notice anything I should change about how I write them.

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Ivaylo watched cooly as Bo’ replaced his helmet. “I like that move,” Ivaylo said, giving Bo’ a rare and fleeting smile.

“Than…[Read more]

@winter rose

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Bo’ took off his helmet and looked around.

The soft clanking of droids sounded not to far off.

The Captain looked at the General, then he walked over to a corner and waited with his helmet in his hands.

As two droids turn the corner, Bo’ swung his helmet and hit the droids straight at their heads, causing them to fall in a…[Read more]

@emma-walker

Sooo, I’ve been wondering, is Bo’ s name short for something? Because it has the little apostrophe and I wasn’t sure if that was just artistic or if it meant something else?

Ivaylo turned and glanced behind him, to the passageway blocked by the mouth of the creature.

“Should we go back for him, General?” Bo’ asked as the two continued running down the tunnel. Ivaylo shook his head.

“Gryphon is resourceful. He’ll find his way back to us, eventually.”

Bo’ nodded and they slowed as they reached another intersection.…[Read more]

The three all took off in a sprint.

unfortunately, Bo’ and Ivaylo ran one way and Gryphon another, and the jaws of the beast snapped around where they had just been standing, blocking the commander’s way back to the others.

Ivaylo nodded. “We don’t have much choice. Stay on alert, keep your voices down, and we could get out of here without incident.” He started down the tunnel, hands close to his lightsaber and blaster.

“I have a bad feeling about this,” Gryphon muttered as he and Bo’ followed after Ivaylo.

They continued on in relative silence for several min…[Read more]

Bo’ grimaced. Today was not the day to be eaten up by some monster.

“should we keep moving?” He asked.

(Sry it’s short)

Bo’ looked up to the wall and caught sight of lurid crimson graffiti written in a strange language.

“This place isn’t very welcoming,” he commented.

“Most places we’re sent, aren’t,” Gryphon said. Their voices mingled with the sound of falling droplets… and then the sound hauntingly morphed into the clanking of battle droids.

Ivaylo g…[Read more]

(Sounds like a good switching place)

Bo’ followed the master Jedi and clone commander in silence.

They all had weapons at the ready as they walked along in a sewer system to get into the castle. They didn’t know what they would run into down there.

“I agree with Reel,” Solstice spoke up. “We can’t just leave him here.”

“Maybe we could use him as a hostage,” Broker suggested. Jaina shook his head.

“No,” She said. “The Separatists don’t work like that. He’d have to be very valuable for them to even consider rescuing him. Besides, our mission isn’t to make a deal.”

“Yeah, ‘cause we’…[Read more]

Jaina agreed with her brother.

“what do we do now?” Cresh asked, walking over to make sure Jaina had come out uninjured.

Jaina remained silent. She was deep in thought, trying to figure something out.

all the Clones remained silent, even Reel for the most part.

Then he spoke up. “Why don’t we take Wolf-Man with us?”