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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
Oooh, let the fun begin!
LOL!!! That was EPIC! I loved the whole thing – so undeniably Sahar!
I LITERALLY LOVE YOUR QUOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay I’m actually going to do a triple post and I hope y’all don’t mind…
Yila
Yila shivered beside Niarok, staring around the cavern as the metallic voice stopped cackling. Oh, she was so done with this!
She gripped two of her sharpest knives in her hands, wondering if she should curl into a ball to conserve energy or start disassembling the castle brick by brick. The fact that she could be killed by a literal inanimate object was infuriating.
Niarok gripped her arm.
“Bedroll. Get the blanket and wrap it around your shoulders.”
Yila nodded. Now was definitely not the time to argue. She raced to her pack and yanked the blanket out, wrapping it tightly around herself. She strapped her quiver on over it, holding it in place.
Niarok did the same as her, glancing around the cavern like he was counting the occupants.
“Where’s Qatar?” he asked, the same moment as Yila felt a stabbing pain in her chest. Something was wrong. Someone was in serious trouble, and this time, it wasn’t one of her loved ones.












