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Hey guys!

I’m working on a synopsis for a novelette of mine and I’m looking for some critique. The title is God of Manna and it’s a symbolic, somewhat dystopian (or utopian, depending on how you look at it) fairytale.

Mortristan was startled by his father’s death.
As life under the God of Manna’s reign grows bleaker and bleaker, he resolves to rebel, but love draws him the other direction. Unsure where to turn, he stumbles further into the God of Manna’s snares. Only one light guides his path.
His father left him a legacy: find something worth living for.
If anyone should be able to find the answer, it would be him. Life wears many masks though, and promising options and deadly traps all look alike.
The world needs a savior and, if he doesn’t find a solution, he will too.

Tear it apart!

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