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Hi! I’d like y’all to critique this piece of poetry for me.

 

Jesus, my only friend and savior

Loved me ‘ere I knew His grace

In my blind and selfish pride

I ran from Your embrace

 

Jesus my only friend and savior,

Bought a sinner with His life

For the joy set before You,

Glory worth the sacrifice

 

Jesus my only friend and savior
When all other friends will flee

He who to death pursued you

Will not now abandon thee

 

Jesus my only friend and savior

King until my dying breath

Surely You will never leave me

Bring to glory, me from death