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Coralie replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Oh my gosh! That was fantastic!! Okay, first off, I loved…gosh, well, all of it! I like the peek into your world-building; the creatures, the political system, the gifts, etc. I completely loved your characters! Saria and the priest and Erika and the prince. Just, guggle! I want MORE!!! (*cough* *blushes* *scrapes boot against floor* *looks down* *coughs again* I, uh…would love to volunteer my services as a beta reader if…uh…you know, that’s not totally uncool…and even if it is…) I really enjoyed your writing style. I like the way you present details in your story and introduce new factors. I am thoroughly intrigued!












